I couldn't decide which of these to post, so I'll post them both and let you decide:
Springtime for lovers--
two bodies, thrusting together
fire burning within
or
Springtime in the park--
two bodies, thrusting together
felony offense
Thursday, March 31, 2005
Sex Haiku
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3 comments:
I like the 1st haiku best .. the fire imagery is more sensual.
I like the first one better too.
Okay, I tweaked the second one to make it conform more with my initial impulse. I replaced "shakin' the bushes" with "criminal offense." Hopefully it's funnier that way.
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