Thursday, March 31, 2005

Sex Haiku

I couldn't decide which of these to post, so I'll post them both and let you decide:

Springtime for lovers--
two bodies, thrusting together
fire burning within

or

Springtime in the park--
two bodies, thrusting together
felony offense
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3 comments:

  1. Nam LaMore2:44 PM

    I like the 1st haiku best .. the fire imagery is more sensual.

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  2. Miranda4:34 PM

    I like the first one better too.

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  3. Randy7:29 PM

    Okay, I tweaked the second one to make it conform more with my initial impulse. I replaced "shakin' the bushes" with "criminal offense." Hopefully it's funnier that way.

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